Monday, April 21, 2025

A nice ***** review for Zephyr's Flight on Goodreads!

Satviki posted a 5* review on Goodreads for Zephyr's Flight

"The story follows Astria as she attempts to fulfil her dream of becoming a dragon Rider and helping the dragons. Following her journey was a rollercoaster of emotional reactions, celebrating the highs of pride and joy at Astria's triumphs, and mourning the lows of her sorrows. In Zephyr's Flight, Ray Strong has woven an truly emotional tale with a strong heroine, who is unapologetically herself despite living in a world that seeks to crush her spirit. Strong developed the characters very well, allowing the reader to become invested in Astria's success. I was certainly invested in her success. The ending was also amazing, heartbreakingly bittersweet with just a dash of beautiful hope. I enjoyed reading Zephyr's Flight, and fans of well written Fantasy with dragons and strong heroines will enjoy Zephyr's Flight as well."

(Zephyr's Flight is still on pre-order until 5/12,.so this is from and advanced copy posted at NetGalley. I hope you'll read it when it launches. Ray)



Tuesday, April 8, 2025

Excerpt from Home: Interstellar, ‘Songlines’


If you haven’t read Bruce Chatwin’s “The Songlines,” I encourage you to (not a purchase request, just a recommendation). There, he wrote about the indigenous cultures of Australia and their relationship with their land. It’s truly profound.

Decades ago, when I read the book, it stunned me and led me to read more about pre-European Australia. Just this week I brought up the book in a conversation because it’s timeless. I will give none of it away to allow you to enjoy the story and the culture he writes about. His book is not science or history, and criticism from those points of view falls flat against what he is expressing. You need to read it with your heart, not your head, and read with a childish sense of wonder. If you want to know what ‘walk about’ really means, read Chatwin.

 

Regarding the excerpt . . .

The environment of Haven in “Home: Interstellar” is like Central Australia: the Outback, where civilized Westerners would have difficulty lasting even a few days.

The passage below focuses on Meriel Hope, the heroine of the book who is recovering from severe injuries. She is staying with her love interest, John, and his two pre-teen girls, Sandy and Becky, who lost their mother a decade earlier. John calls their home a farm, but it’s actually a desert irrigated by groundwater. During a trip to ‘walk the fence,’ Merial and Sandy talk before bed, and Meriel recognizes her relationship with the stars.

 

“Songlines” From Home: Interstellar, Chapter 13

 

Meriel sat with her back against the chuckwagon with Sandy snuggled under her arm and Becky asleep in her lap. Together they watched Thor set on the Western horizon and the stars that followed. Like John and the rest of the work crew, they were tired from the long three-day trek. Without it, the groundwater supply would remain uncertain and larger critters could sneak onto the farm through the gaps in the electric fence.

Much of the trek Meriel spent in the wagon, so her injuries would not slow them down. Tomorrow morning, they would be home for the start of the Harvest Fair. And at the day’s end, she would make her decision to leave or to stay, a decision she did not want to make.

“Do you know about the stars, hon?” Meriel said.

Sandy smiled. “Only to wish on.”

“How?”

“Mommy said that everything that’s made is made in stars, so wishing on ’em makes the wish stronger. Here, close your eyes and say after me.

 

            “Star light, star bright,

            All the stars within my sight.

            Wish I may. Wish I might.

            Grant the wish I wish tonight.”

 

“That’s it?” Meriel asked.

“Yup. But then you have to cross your heart, so the stars know you mean it.”

Meriel did as instructed. “What did you wish for?”

“Oh, you can’t tell your wish or the stars will forget.”

“What star did you wish on?”

“Me? I wish on that big one there,” Sandy said and pointed to a bright star in the south.

“That’s Aldebaran,” Meriel said. “And the fuzzy patch there are the Pleiades. It’s also called the Seven Sisters.”

Sandy kept her eyes on Meriel. “Do you miss them?”

“Who?”

“I’ve watched you look at the stars, Merry. Are you going back to space?”

Perceptive girl. “I’m not sure, hon. I’m a spacer.”

Sandy bit her lip and turned away.

“I talked to your father. It might not be safe for you to be around me.”

“You’re just saying that ’cause you want to leave.”

“I don’t think I would be a good mom.”

“I don’t need a mom. She’s been gone a long time now, and no one could replace her, anyway. I know Becky does, but that’s only because she doesn’t remember her much.”

Maybe she does, and I won’t match up. “I won’t go away forever, hon. My family is coming here, and you are part of that. I’ll always return.”

“For them?”

“For you.” She took Sandy’s little hand. “You’re like me when I was a kid. Strong. Full of ideas. And you love your little sister.”

Sandy gazed at her with a smile. “Yeah.”

They were silent for a while as a meteor arced across the sky.

“Merry, is space your home? Your song?”

“What do you mean, hon?”

“Like your home isn’t a place, but a path.”

“I don’t understand.”

“Our teacher told us about a place on Earth called Australia that’s kinda like Haven—real dry with animals and people that don’t live anywhere else. She said the native people don’t have any place to settle down ’cause the land is poor and can’t sustain them. But they have trails they walk over the course of a year or more.” Sandy scooted over and between them drew an irregular shape in the dirt that returned to its starting point. “That was their route. And many tribes would walk the same land but have different routes.” She drew other closed shapes that meandered back and forth and crossed each other. “And as they walked, they sang of the places they passed, the hills and the plants, their ancestors and the spirits. They called them songlines.”

Meriel imagined tribes of people following Sandy’s little fingers as she traced their trails in the dirt.

“You know them all, don’t you?” Sandy asked. “All the stars.”

She nodded. “Pretty much. One of the first things that spacers do when they arrive somewhere is to orient themselves to the stars and constellations.”

“Tell me.”

“Well, my first spacewalk was near Wolf 359. That’s over there.” A star hovered above the horizon, and she pointed to it. “That was the happiest day of my life, well, before I met you and your sister.” She squeezed Sandy’s hand. “My mom and pop died near Procyon. The Princess is docked there at Enterprise Station. Over there is Lalande 21185, close to where I met your father. That’s behind Thor now, and you can’t see it.” Meriel took the fringe of Sandy’s shirt between her fingers. “The Crab nebula glows a teal color like your sleeves.”

“You make the stars real for me, Merry. That’s your song. You just don’t have a melody for it yet.”

“My route could be my home?”

Sandy nodded and snuggled into her arms. “Just make part of it here with us.”

Meriel hugged her and nudged Becky under her other arm so the three of them could stretch out. There they watched the last slice of Thor set with stories of the stars until Sandy fell asleep.

As Meriel drifted off, the memory returned of her and her sister sleeping in her father’s arms after their adventure on the dino-sims. For the first time, she realized what her father felt that day. “Oh, Papa,” she murmured and tightened her embrace of the girls, though the tears tickled her cheeks.

. . .

Using the visor she had dug out from the rubble, Meriel found a reference in Galactipedia and listened.

 

The native peoples of Australia still walk their songlines, paths unique to each tribe or language group. While they walk, they sing of how the gods sang the world into being: the mountains, the streams, the plants and animals, and all the features of their world. Those songs brought forth all the distinctions of rock and food and poison that made their home possible to live in. And when the gods finished their songs of creation, they taught their people the songs and lay down and became the land. For many thousands of years, every time the people walk their songlines, they sing their world and their gods back into being.

 

(end excerpt)

 

Happy reading.

Ray

 

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